Dr Hitesh Sheth

Rookie - 3 Points (Birth Place: Earth)

Seven Year Itch (Haiku) - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

Now he wants to drink
water from his neighbour’s well-
Seven Year Itch.


‘Seven Year Itch’, the title of Marilyn Monroe’s movie in which one character wants to have an extramarital relationship after seven years of his marriage.

Dr Hitesh C Sheth

19/12/2008


Comments about Seven Year Itch (Haiku) by Dr Hitesh Sheth

  • Veteran Poet - 1,882 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (1/31/2012 6:56:00 AM)

    Brilliant! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie rago rago (7/6/2009 1:26:00 AM)

    cute brief and truth naked............. well write...... also see you in In Poem Hunter......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (5/30/2009 12:14:00 PM)

    water i water the neighbour has'nt made it...it should be drunk (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 813 Points Antonio Liao (4/30/2009 12:46:00 AM)

    A LEAVES OF ILLUSION THE DREAM OF A DREAM...
    a lighted candle in the....daylight...very beautiful
    i do reading it with emotion...thank you God bless (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rory Hudson (4/18/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    A lot of meaning in a few words. Well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,237 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (3/23/2009 12:07:00 AM)

    the message is naked, clothed words which are nude.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (3/20/2009 4:36:00 AM)

    A mind stirring haiku, great job here Dr. well, this happens in our society today and we can't close our eyes upon the reality...10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,723 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (2/26/2009 11:44:00 AM)

    A ten from me.Thou shalt not covet thy neighbor's etc...one of the ten commandments.I write haiku and if you get a chance please read, rate and comment on my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKUS, page 8 of my Poemhunter collection.Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Deepti Agarwal (1/6/2009 4:01:00 AM)

    its all in the mind.. i dont believe it...
    one has to have faith n love alive..thats all... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (12/28/2008 3:29:00 AM)

    Hey, you scratch my back, i'll scratch yours! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Whitney Nicole Albright* (12/27/2008 11:48:00 PM)

    haha I agree that the itch should never be scratched. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (12/27/2008 10:57:00 AM)

    other man's wife z always more attractive even b4 the 7th yr! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr Kamran Haider (12/24/2008 12:44:00 AM)

    Wow... simply beautiful and amazingly truthful... Human form can't remain satisfied with one love... We keep one asking for more... Very well said...10 +++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (12/23/2008 8:58:00 AM)

    grass greener on the other side.............! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (12/23/2008 2:23:00 AM)

    Simply wonderful........that is the way to write....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Churchill (12/21/2008 2:40:00 PM)

    Nice piece of work..

    KRISTA (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Min Sia (12/21/2008 9:56:00 AM)

    With those simple expressive words of..all has been said...

    Very beautiful...

    Truly a piece of art! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 270 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/21/2008 7:47:00 AM)

    good 'itching' ku...the message goes well even without your post script, Hitesh...intelligent imaginative work...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (12/21/2008 2:04:00 AM)

    Yes Dr Hitesh, I like it as all Manhattanites, I appreciate your digging capacity of ancient fantasies, Thanks for sharing the great work like Thiruvalluvar Style.
    Best Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kite Remedy (12/21/2008 1:47:00 AM)

    simple and sweet, not to mention its message beyond the words.
    nice work.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 19, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 26, 2009