She's More Like A Life Poem by J Knight

She's More Like A Life

Rating: 5.0


Her loving smile lights up the sky
brighter than all that sun
Her gorgous lips, shower me with precious kisses
showing her love and lust

She's more than a summer day
more like a life-
and all this heat pours out of her.
This heat of the summer
its all her

I lay down
dizzy and love sick
my heart pumping love (soft in my veins like heroin)
and it wont stop.
(She's always there, deep in my mind) smiling,
If i could just live forever
i would always love her.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Autumn Jones 17 July 2009

Another really good read. The way you write and describe, I feel it all the way and I have to say it takes my breath away. WOW! 10 for sure. -Autumn

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Tai Chi Italy 25 June 2009

A simply beautiful romantic walk in the park J Knight! The brackets really give those two lines power from your heart, adored them both. If only we could live forever? I loves embrace, we do. It is a matter of 'How will you be remembered? ' Smiling at you Tai

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