Treasure Island

J Knight

(9/25/90-Yesterday / Watertown, N.Y.)

She's more like a Life


Her loving smile lights up the sky
brighter than all that sun
Her gorgous lips, shower me with precious kisses
showing her love and lust

She's more than a summer day
more like a life-
and all this heat pours out of her.
This heat of the summer
its all her

I lay down
dizzy and love sick
my heart pumping love (soft in my veins like heroin)
and it wont stop.
(She's always there, deep in my mind) smiling,
If i could just live forever
i would always love her.

Submitted: Wednesday, June 24, 2009

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  • Autumn Jones (7/17/2009 4:28:00 PM)

    Another really good read. The way you write and describe, I feel it all the way and I have to say it takes my breath away. WOW! 10 for sure. -Autumn (Report) Reply

  • Tai Chi Italy (6/25/2009 2:42:00 AM)

    A simply beautiful romantic walk in the park J Knight! The brackets really give those two lines power from your heart, adored them both. If only we could live forever? I loves embrace, we do. It is a matter of 'How will you be remembered? '

    Smiling at you

    Tai (Report) Reply

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