Bikramjyoti Kashyop

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She Was Perfect I Remember In Her Body, Mind And Soul


It was August I remember
I remember when I met her
She was perfect I remember
in her body, mind and soul

In September I remember
I remember her all over
She was perfect I remember
in her body, mind and soul

In October I remember
I remember her all over
We were lovers I remember
in body, mind and soul

In November I remember
I remember lies she told me
She was wilful I remember
Wilful to the n'th degree

In December I remember
I remember it was over
Still, she is all that I remember
Love forever sweet Nicole

Submitted: Tuesday, November 01, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, November 01, 2011

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  • Bronze Star - 2,082 Points Luis Estable (11/1/2011 3:39:00 AM)

    At times repetition does not work well in some poems, but in this one I think it does.

    This is simple but sweet and to the point without playing around too much.

    Take care now! (Report) Reply

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