She Was Raining Tears Poem by buzzy babe

She Was Raining Tears

Rating: 5.0


While the sky was raining
water she was raining tears,
she told you how she felt your
answer was her worst fear.

She knew you didnt like her in
that way but still she had to try,
though she didnt understand she
was so confused why were tears falling from her eyes.

She is so frustrated and
completely torn apart,
having to hold all
of this in her heart.

All the happiness and joy
in her life has gone,
then she asks herself,
how this one thing in her life go so wrong? .

Why does she cry over
you and feel so much pain,
she cant take it any more
its makin her go insane.

So every night she cries herself to
sleep hoping that no-one will see,
that this confused
frustrated girl is me.

Every night i sit alone
in my room and cry,
watching the rain pour
from the skies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

good comparisons and similies, helps us understand your point of view and the message of sadness in the poem, nice work :)

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Marilyn Lott 13 June 2008

A very sad and heartfelt poem. Keep writing and sharing. Get's a '10' from me! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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