Ship Of My Past Tanka Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Ship Of My Past Tanka

Rating: 5.0


alone...
the ship of my past
sinking slowly
on this winter night
a lifeboat in patchy fog

Sunday, August 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,past,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 27 August 2017

Leaving the past behind. And moving into the future. An excellent poem of optimism!

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Qiniso Mogale 27 August 2017

the ship of my past sinking slowly. Brilliant piece of poetry

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