hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,281 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Simple Joke - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

What can delight us more?
Enough of wealth or nature
Autumn or spring
What can it bring?

I found an answer
As child needs care
We too need something to nurture
For happiness in future

No one may like autumn
It is of great concern
The age is worrying
Lots of problems, it is carrying

Actual end is nearing
In mind it caters
Generates fear
With lot more to bear

Lt us look back
And find nothing was at stake
It was just smoke
Life was simple joke


Comments about Simple Joke by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 38,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2014 9:35:00 PM)

    Bravo! ! ! !

    Enjoyed the spirit! ! ! ! Bring it on Sir! !

    Warm regards,


    Supratik Sen, Hyderabad
    Apr 02,2014 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 38,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2014 6:49:00 AM)

    Everyones's greatest secret fear, I think; the possibility that there actually is no meaning to life.
    11 hours ago by Chaos 1214 to Simple joke (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2014 6:15:00 AM)

    I loved the didactic poem as it tells an absolute truth.
    Thanks for the poem, Hasmukh ji.


    partha sarathi paul, guskara-burdwan
    Apr 01,2014 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2014 6:51:00 PM)

    welcome shujat ahmed
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  • Gold Star - 38,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    Beautiful and True

    B Marie32 minutes ago
    Excellent work. Write On! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    I like last line


    Tom Kennedy33 minutes ago
    Enjoyed your poem Hasmukh.....................................................Tom Kennedy (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2014 9:42:00 AM)

    Rajesh Jaiswal likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Rookie - 21 Points Suman Kumar Das (3/31/2014 9:42:00 AM)

    Another perspective of life..............Really we are yet to bear a lot of suffer through out life......But we always hope the best.............A poignant write with full of melody..................liked it, Sir! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2014 9:27:00 AM)

    What can delight us more?
    Enough of wealth or nature (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 31, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, March 31, 2014


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