A bouquet of clouds on my way
Suspect as a revamp of nature
Gaze at me to shower or fade
Few white tangs that stoop itself
Revive or sink in that troop's side
Roof that gloomy and shaded
Horizon not visible and baffled
Mighty visual pelts inside
Darkness rear and pert itself
Rays that array in emptiness
Can sniff something unusual
Cleansing part that sets itself
Rejuvenation that retrieve some sobs
Coldness that marvel grumpiness
Lift of life to the lulls of nature
Started shower in trembled way
Fertile lives that peep and bops
Need to rescue from this troop
Rejoices is meant in nature side
Decides to withdraw to a parasol
It sprinkled and departed
Long time of sensation
Visual that revert some emptiness
Even the rays will lapse something
Frenzy part that departed soon! ! ! ! !
©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved
Title itself is so beautiful even stones are wet when sunk in water and when taken out - its dry nice poem
A very well crafted piece indeed having beautiful metaphor of life...........amazing write
When rain falls unexpected, we may not be prepared for it! But somehow it gives a cool effect and revives the parched lands with vegetation, though may not last for long! Great write!
A ‘frenzy that departed soon! '.. poetic words
Beautiful poem Salini with interesting lines... It sprinkled and departed Long time of sensation Visual that revert some emptiness Even the rays will lapse something Frenzy part that departed soon! ! ! ! ! when unexpected rains falls, we are not prepared, but when it goes, it leaves some emptiness behind. Loved it.
In every line of the poem the creativity is superb and still I most likes the lines from Started shower in trembled way to Decides to withdraw to a parasol felt most interesting. The poetic skill of the poetess is really amazing and appreciated in such sense of literary interest.
'It sprinkled and departed Long time of sensation'. Nicely envisioned.Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
it is really outstanding.................honestly, this poem shall surely have a great impact on every reader..................so so nice..........that i can't even write more about it................thanks for sharing this poignant poem.