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What do you think this poem is about?

sleep

sleep

even sleep
cannot close
my eyes
with lies.

Submitted: Sunday, August 12, 2007
Edited: Monday, March 28, 2011

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  • Kelvin Karani (1/3/2010 1:21:00 AM)

    sleep

    even sleep
    cannot close
    my eyes
    with lies..........
    ...................

    10+

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  • Indira Renganathan (8/25/2009 10:10:00 AM)

    So let the lies rest in eternal sleep....nice read...thank you

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  • Kelvin Karani (8/6/2009 5:47:00 AM)

    this great piece utilizes the absurd to get across. Many questions and their answers are left to the reader.

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  • Sylvi Sylva (1/2/2008 4:34:00 PM)

    Great read and keep em coming, Jomo!

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  • Linda Weischedel (1/2/2008 1:59:00 AM)

    Wicked poem, I like this one a lot Jomo!

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  • Shazaad Hosany (10/21/2007 8:11:00 AM)

    Stunning lines. Hats off.

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  • Ana Monnar (8/19/2007 8:57:00 PM)

    Very clever write. : -)))))))))

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  • Firoze Shakir Bollywoods Most Wanted Poet Of India (8/12/2007 1:07:00 AM)

    powerful..awakening thought

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