What love hast thou inspired
In loud laments I sing
The goddess of night
With the tinkle of music
Slow and slow
The book of love
The visions slow
For yet another night
In the nest of love
Like Heer* adamant
For eternal breathe
In the open skies
Hidden is not
Once you wear
The cloak of love
Like a monk
To the monastery
Step in slow
The beloved in dance
For the body bends
In the distant wilderness
Love celebrates
Sans rituals
When the costume slips
Down the mounds
The silk of her love
The zephyr in the night
Under the moon
Lit the fire of love
With vintage wine
And her bending body
(*Heer was the legendry beloved of Ranjha, a love story)
16/1/2008
Nice pattern.. I like the line that reads with the tinkle of music that is nice.. Great piece Krista
love mixed with romance and care seen in your lines.....slow and slow lines makes me to involve.....quite and calm reading your lines my heart goes for a walk...sebastine
Sans rituals slipped the costume down the mounds, silk and the zephyr lit the fire of love with the vintage wine, for another night in the nest of love she gave in at last slow slow the visions show to the depth of your love amidst the tinkle of music for eternal breath in the open skies
Slowness is the beauty of love.... Love dances in ecstasy in this poem.... Beautiful Sadiq......10/10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nicely done... I like this great write KRISTA