Golden peach and amber streaks through blue
Lightly suspended below dark billowing clouds
A cool autumn breeze touches my cheek
Yellow and red dance hand in hand as the fire ascends
An interlude of blue and smoky white arises with the scent of hickory
From the flames I see a vision
Smiling back at me
We dance beneath the stars as the music softly strums
Lost in heaven for a time
A cool trickle is felt ….slowly falling to the earth
The vision and the fire slowly fade
But for the moment you were here
Patricia how many of us have visions of our love, in such beautiful moments like these... Andrew 10
All I can say is that poem had me therePatricia absolutely beautiful its so nice to read you again 10 Chris
Excellent piece, Patricia, , enjoyed its story and immagery, And loved the last line
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
an wonderful piece, beautiful flow of words. I love it