Snow Bird Poem by Ben Partenay

Snow Bird

Rating: 5.0


How will the bird come back,
fix the feathers, it’s getting
cold out, there’s ice in the bones.
The child is pacing inside of me.

This cold is a promise as good
as a word, a shake of the hand
that sits and rots inside you.
Your soul is but a whisper now.

It is a nothing to hear a promise
let it become a faith, a tiny flower
buried in snow, the bird
still sitting on the windowsill.

It was a blind face that saw
the bird fly, deafness fled with
a pair of wings, a heart left numb
was clawing at the pane of glass.

She’ll be back if the winds
are right and the weather’s warm
enough for the taking. I am without
A word for saying, “promise me”.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 05 November 2008

sweet topic, Ben. So sensitive and perceptive, you balance the two perfectly. best care xx sjg

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