*so Deep Poem by Marieta Maglas

*so Deep

Rating: 5.0


I hope to meet you on my way,
Cause you can change my bleeding life.
Hope it will be a rainy day,
That day when I'll become your wife.

I dream you take me in your arms.
This way, I tell you what I feel.
Then, hearts become cosmic alarms~
And hide this love wave of our thrill.

New drops of dawn may meet again
The tears in your eyes during sleep.
I hold you and I feel your pain.
With you, I fall in love. It's deep.

While dreaming in our white canoe,
Two hearts, 'til end entwined as one.
His Hand can paint the sky in blue
Taking His color from the sun.

When the green starts to grow in grains,
I close the memories inside,
The feeling pulsing in my veins,
And this love song, a last sea tide.

Copyright © ® Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.
2010

Monday, April 19, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: suffering
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Bursting with a beauty that is both creative and compelling. well done my friend!

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Mary Thomson 20 April 2011

Nice composition deeper than my thoughts will learn many thing from you.

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‘You will bring beauty from my pain.’… ‘Our kiss will be pierced by the rays of sun’. Sparkling like fragmented minusculed diamond ohh ...terrific diction Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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