So Deeply, Love Is Felt Poem by Sandra Feldman

So Deeply, Love Is Felt

Rating: 5.0


I have loved but you,
In the shadows of my loneliness
In the depths of my solitude
In the sadness, of a gray blue sea,
Drowning in the pain of separation
Carried by cold winds of litany,
Memories and constant repetition
That keep crying, deep inside of me.

I shall love but you,
Even in separation,
Like the Lonely moon
Loves the vastness of the sea,
As her light at night is reflected,
Floating diamonds, of a love,
That's felt so preciously,
And is so deeply embedded,
That no matter where, my destiny,
I shall love you deeply
Till life's ended,
Then together we shall be
In that secret place
Where all love is blended
With the stars,
You and me, forever,
Forever, free.

Friday, April 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: true love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 19 April 2019

A wonderful promise of love! 10!

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Lamar Cole 19 April 2019

Great love poem. One of the best that I have ever read.

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Bill Cantrell 19 April 2019

Wow..wow, , , wow! ! ! How appropriate to bring a witness to verify the depth of your love, your lonely moon..which I have visited many nights when I needed poetic balance, bless you Sandra for being a true poetess of this age! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 April 2019

I shall love but you/Even in separation/Like the Lonely moon….the expression emanates from an illustrious pen…the stark beauty and depth of expression partially resembles the articulation of Shakespeare’s True love…10

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C F 07 June 2019

Can love and pain and longing be properly defined? Your poem paints them all....

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 May 2019

I have loved but you, In the shadows of my loneliness.. The poem begins well as it ends as well, Fabulous.

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Aqua Flower 12 May 2019

Like Bill commented! " WOW" this poem blew me away. This shall be placed in my favorites. Your excellence in writing love poetry shines brightly here!

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Jennifer Birchall 21 April 2019

A truly wonderful poem of everlasting love, so beautifully written dear Sandra.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 April 2019

I shall love but you, Even in separation, Like the Lonely moon Loves the vastness of the sea! This is true love! An outstanding poem on love. Wonderfully expressed through this poem, dear Poetess Sandra. A 100 for this deeply felt love!

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