NENGOVHELA MURENDENI

Rookie (08-01-199 / LIMPOPO (VENDA\THOHOYANDOU/MARAXWE))

So, She Dumped Me - Poem by NENGOVHELA MURENDENI

I used to believe in her
She used to trust in me
She loved me and care for me
But now I know all was empty lies.

I was happy, the day I saw her
Coming running to me
We huged each other, and kissed
A thousand of my kisses, to her I gave.

Her sweetness I enjoyed
She felt me, we make love.
I promised, She promised
To DEATH, FOREVER IT WILL BE.

TODAY, I smile a childish smile
When I saw her, SHE GAVE ME AN ACID-SMILE

I've been litted into a rubbish bin
Now i'm dancing in the ashes with no one else around.

What happened I dont know
BUT SO, SHE DUMPED ME
For an unkown reason.


Comments about So, She Dumped Me by NENGOVHELA MURENDENI

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (6/14/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    OUCH! ! ! ! ! ! That hurts...lovely moving poem...Heart felt one! Thanks....I echo Alf suggestions... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Carol Gall (6/12/2009 2:20:00 PM)

    betrayal at any age hurts good poem 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vanessa Hibberd (6/12/2009 2:20:00 PM)

    You can feel the sorrow and anger in your words and the contrast between your words when comparing the childish and acid smile is amazing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 354 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (6/12/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    love seems to be betrayed, that happens to happen at times by reeks of closeness knowing more each other....quite poignant ans passionate write..10+, thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/12/2009 2:14:00 PM)

    a sad ending for a beautiful story..well expressed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rofhatutshedzwa Nephawe (6/12/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    well done Mr Murendi, u r a genius. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 6, 2009


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