Neela Nath

Some May Say

you are beyond
the word sane.
I know your surfing pain.
The river also
takes the thing
with her she does love,
and flows, to sing,
the song she knows
and the wish which blows,
shows her way to the sea.
Her desire for the unknown grows.
Your pain you condense into
your poetic pen,
you get easily whatever
you want, never lose but gain.
I know your pain.
Some may say you
are beyond the word sane.
But what I know, know a few.

Submitted: Wednesday, May 22, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Some May Say by Neela Nath )

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (6/7/2013 1:46:00 PM)

    Another fine poem full of passion Hari. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,812 Points Patricia Grantham (6/6/2013 9:16:00 PM)

    A well thought out poem and very interesting.
    Thanks for sharing this one. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/2/2013 1:00:00 AM)

    Well penned poem Hari.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,362 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/24/2013 11:14:00 PM)

    beyond the word sane/Though he got the pain yet he has the normal healthy mind and also not mentally ill/ well penned and a nice poem 10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,115 Points Thomas A Robinson (5/23/2013 5:00:00 PM)

    What is sane?
    Someone who is smarter than we?
    Beyond sane? I don't know what you mean.
    Rivers are collection agencies. In the occupation of transporting raindrops
    to the seas below. Take away the raindrop and what becomes of the river?
    A scarred memory etched into the sands of time.
    Is a man sane if he is alone?
    Does he go mad in solitary confinement?
    When the river delivers the last raindrop and there are no tears to shed
    will it have a spirit to present to God?
    I think not. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 206 Points R.j. Wynn (5/23/2013 8:45:00 AM)

    A very inspirational poem for sure. (Report) Reply

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