Neela Nath


Some May Say - Poem by Neela Nath

you are beyond
the word sane.
I know your surfing pain.
The river also
takes the thing
with her she does love,
and flows, to sing,
the song she knows
and the wish which blows,
shows her way to the sea.
Her desire for the unknown grows.
Your pain you condense into
your poetic pen,
you get easily whatever
you want, never lose but gain.
I know your pain.
Some may say you
are beyond the word sane.
But what I know, know a few.


Comments about Some May Say by Neela Nath

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (6/7/2013 1:46:00 PM)

    Another fine poem full of passion Hari. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,662 Points Patricia Grantham (6/6/2013 9:16:00 PM)

    A well thought out poem and very interesting.
    Thanks for sharing this one. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/2/2013 1:00:00 AM)

    Well penned poem Hari.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/24/2013 11:14:00 PM)

    beyond the word sane/Though he got the pain yet he has the normal healthy mind and also not mentally ill/ well penned and a nice poem 10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (5/23/2013 5:00:00 PM)

    What is sane?
    Someone who is smarter than we?
    Beyond sane? I don't know what you mean.
    Rivers are collection agencies. In the occupation of transporting raindrops
    to the seas below. Take away the raindrop and what becomes of the river?
    A scarred memory etched into the sands of time.
    Is a man sane if he is alone?
    Does he go mad in solitary confinement?
    When the river delivers the last raindrop and there are no tears to shed
    will it have a spirit to present to God?
    I think not. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (5/23/2013 8:45:00 AM)

    A very inspirational poem for sure. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013


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