Some Prefer Fire Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Some Prefer Fire

Rating: 5.0


Her smile feels comfortable
Like a child's pastel drawing.
Another day he writes;
When I peeped into her heart
Oh! Really it's burning like a volcano.
But it's a wintry night and I cannot leave the premises.
So I decided to stay longer voluntarily.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 06 April 2009

So many wear masks to hide their passion and rage. Methinks your subject enjoys the volcano hidden but so warming to the spirit on a shivering day. You use words like a fine craftsman uses his chisel. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 24 March 2009

To each his own. Love has many moods. Excellent write, Nimal. Always your friend, Sandra

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Indira Babbellapati 24 March 2009

yes...obviously because fire is purifying!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 24 March 2009

yea some brave one prefers to play with a fire.......a fire of love.....Good Write....10+++

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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