Some Strangers Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Some Strangers



The dark night has set in
It is one more day for setting of sun
I have taken challenge
And mostly proved of an age

I don't remember
How many days are over?
But it passes smoothly
Life seems so lovely

I have never thought
To be caught
By some stranger
To enter

But I dream sometimes
To have good company to recent times
The fresh flowers attract
Full blossom compels me to act

Yes, destined time may reach
At any time it may approach
I will waste no more time
But accept and welcome

Tuesday, November 4, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2014

The dark night has set in It is one more day for setting of sun

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

Freedom Jeremy Palmer26 minutes ago Your flow is very open. not holding to tradition form. But still is unknown which direction and what is the feeling of the work.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

Marvelous Dushyant BholaLess than a minute ago Good write on some strangers. Nice and vivid imagery. Comment +1 .

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

deent poem, Nathaniel HoBs Jenkins5 hours ago I enjoyed reading it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

Good poem carlos santiago10 hours ago Of a truth Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

Nice poem. Good words. MALLIKA GANGAKHEDKAR11 hours ago Good words, with good meaning.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

welcome Shamenaz Shaikh and Chantal Jager like this. Just now · Unlike · 1 1 hour ag

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

Very nice Mrinmoy Choudhury28 minutes ago A very good write - I like it. I like the following lines - Yes, destined time may reach At any time it may approach I will waste no more time But accept and welcome Comment +1

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