Something Improper Poem by Genevieve Surrender

Something Improper

Rating: 4.5


For a woman like me
it is improper
to act such things.

But it is only acceptable
when I do so
through poetry.

So now
my hand is in your pants
in the back of number 18
in the easton theater.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessica H 06 November 2005

I like how you can express it at least through poetry you're right though saying this in everyday conversation would just freak everyone out. I like it

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***** ********* 06 November 2005

Sounds like Jail bait to me Callisto! lol 8 for imagination. Grinning Tai

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Lucy Burrow 06 November 2005

How true! I really like this poem. excellent idea and well said! Regards, Lucy

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Erica Francis 10 November 2005

Tai, your appology is accepted. I hope you accept mine for whatever I have done to offend you.

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***** ********* 09 November 2005

You are right callisto. I apologise. I have removed the offending rant! I allowed my emotions to get the better of me. Your poem is insightful. Hope that is ok? Tai

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Erica Francis 07 November 2005

I feel very insulted by your comments, Tai. I don't know if you mean it that way, but I mean it this way: if you're malicious with your words, don't leave them here. They're unappreciated.

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Erica Francis 06 November 2005

Dear Tai, I only have a day over months until I am no longer jailbait. Thank you for your concern though.

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Indiscreet Episode 06 November 2005

Wow. I haven't found the seats at the Easton 18 to be all that accommodating, the arm rests seem a bit bulky for such adventures.

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