DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK


Sometimes - Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Sometimes

Yesterday,
Why did I chide her?
Sitting and sobbing,
In a room near the stair,
And my ears listening,
My heart throbbing
With her cry, not fair,
My mind says, I did to her,
Sometimes I’m a little rude,
Though always good at heart,
Sometimes heart is so full,
That it could fall apart,
Sometimes I smile and wonder,
The heart I loved is gone forever,
And the life is like a shallow river,
No depth to charm the swimmer,
Sometimes, autumn
Sends withered leaves,
Blowing and rustling all day,
Like a tattered, flying mass,
Splashing my heart’s window glass,
Sometimes I’m happy and sad,
Sometimes I’m warm and cold,
Sometimes I’m alive and dead,
Sometimes it’s all in my head,
Situations keep changing,
The world keeps spinning around,
While from within I’m whirling around......


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A poem on human feelings.......

Comments about Sometimes by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

  • Gold Star - 16,632 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/27/2014 2:17:00 AM)

    Many many thanks..........Valsa......reviewing beautifully with meaningful words.......... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 24,732 Points Valsa George (1/27/2014 1:20:00 AM)

    Man is a bundle of contradictions and a mammoth pile of antagonistic emotions! Even in the height of joy, a sad thought can set in and steal all our happiness!

    Sometimes, autumn
    Sends withered leaves,
    Blowing and rustling all day,
    Like a tattered, flying mass,

    Beautiful lines! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,632 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/26/2014 8:49:00 AM)

    Many many thanks.............kanav.............I am humbled.................. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (1/26/2014 3:27:00 AM)

    a sad poem brilliantly written, , nice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 26, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 26, 2014


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