Somewhere Else I Know Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Somewhere Else I Know



We are here not some where else,
Yet sometimes I feel I'm some where else.
Yes I know you are I'm some where else.

Sunday, October 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: green
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 23 October 2018

(cont.) p.s. the last line would sound more 'normal' if it had a period after are, but i don't know what the author is trying to convey to me. but certainly the poems i've read today from sir James are more clear than some i've read, and i KNOW they are shorter! !

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Bri Edwards 23 October 2018

VERY GREEN, indeed! ! I'll grant you 'Poetic License' to use some where rather than somewhere. maybe it makes things more 'poetic'? ? Sometimes when i get 'in trouble at home' i'd rather be SOMEWHERE ELSE! ! ! LIKE AT the ICE CREAM SHOP! (every day) bri :) (cont.)

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Kim Barney 21 October 2018

Some of us never know where we are (or even who we are) ! Thanks for posting, James.

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