Song Children At Play Poem by Heather Burns

Song Children At Play

Rating: 5.0


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A little boy met a little girl
called her out to play
placing his hand in her
little one
They laughed and skipped
away.

(CHORUS)
They came upon a meadow
Daisies growing everywhere
pausing for a moment
He placed a flower in her
hair.

#2
A little boy, met a little
girl
called her out to play
placed a ring on her finger
They laughed, and slipped away.

(CHORUS)
They came upon a meadow
daisies growing everywhere
fell in love in he meadows
built their dream house there.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2013

Beautiful poem...Lovely fairytales..Beautiful way you have portrayed...Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2013

Nice enactment. Keep playing again, again, and again. Delightful poem. Thank you.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 August 2013

A sweet poem to read. D stuff of fairytales in neverland where children neva grow up so they need to place a ring in childhood. To me dis reminds of hindu child mariages. Take care n tnx 4 a fine fab flowing poem.

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Lyn Paul 30 August 2013

A real fairytale..... I am with Thomas

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Neela Nath Das 29 August 2013

Unique! A song of experience in a packet of experience.

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Shahzia Batool 31 August 2013

melodious...all lines and esp the chorus! ! !

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Valsa George 31 August 2013

Is it a re submission? I feel I have read it before and commented on it! Any way a beautiful poem! !

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 August 2013

a sweet song of love lost for good yet forever remembered!

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Brian Skyers 30 August 2013

A very sweet story, the way we hope it to be..nice.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 August 2013

Nature sung the song with nature lovely HB i love this poem nice work

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