Kranthi Pothineni (1982)

Love is a song. Beautiful rhyme well done.

Very rythmic and beautiful...10

This is unquestionalbly one of the very best poems I have ever read by an Asiatic writer, Kranthi. I immediately liked your using the same rhyme for all the lines of most of your verses, an effective and often difficult technique for many writers. Another thing I admired was that it was not an overly long and rambling poem, but one with clearly defined verses, giving it a far more reader friendly and overall better presentation. I loved most of the lines in this fine poem, but think your ending line would sound a bit better if you made it, 'Just sing thy song of love! ' In romantic poems such as this, the occasional use of Old English words, like Shakespeare's, really enhance a poem. It's something to remember for your future romantic poems. Carl.

Carries a poetic musical cadence. Nice one.

Love makes the world go round

when you have a song in your heart, you must sing to your hearts content.
for in your heart there is so much to say, than in poetry, what better way.

a ten my friend

my last two poems which i put on are ' you are not alone'
and ' the vision'
if you have the time to read these two and comment and rate

very interesting piece of poetry.. Gr8t

hey that is a really awesome way of puting it.
i really like it! ! ! ! !

Nice end rhymes.
Well penned.

Keep up the good work,
Davke