Song Of The Narrow Road Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Song Of The Narrow Road

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His melancholy song began exceeding its limits.
In those days he used to sing the same old song:
'Why these ears, hey! If they do not hear? '
Old man is crying for help.
It's useless if they are annoying?
Only this shadowless precarious man who accompanies him
Until his last breath.
Oh! This melancholy song exceeds its limits.

I dedicate this poem to Sandra & Dave in gratitude.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 01 September 2007

A wistful piece filled with melancholy and remembrances of the past. Yet never a word wasted. Wonderful poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 28 August 2007

Sad yet beautifully put together Nimal, there is always so much emotion in your writes Thankyou for sharing this Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 24 August 2007

Your melancholy song resonates. You and I seem to have an affinity with shadows and shadows speak a language all their own. You are writing so well. It is a pleasure to comment. Encore! Warmest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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