Stacey James (10/21/2008 2:27:00 PM)
your poem is really good carry on with the perfect poems! ! ! |
Marie Smith (10/21/2007 6:19:00 AM)
Falling out of love is more complex than just a surface attraction perhaps the poet has merely become bored with her obvious beauty and indeed there is nothing more interesting to captivate his wit, beneath her 'unchanged face' a challenge to Shakespeare whose love sonnets tend to relate death of love to passages of time and loss of aesthetic beauty thus his attempt to immortalise love's beauty in words |
Archie Langford (10/21/2007 4:42:00 AM)
this is a sonnet and a half. |
Micah Ogberhie (10/21/2006 12:11:00 PM)
I like ur unusual style, a sort of ''inversion'' and ur use of ellipses which shows that u are a poet to d core, though ur poem is not a sonnet by its technical meaning but i suppose ur choice of theme is best understood 2 u...cheers! |
Christian Eliab Ratnam (10/21/2005 7:11:00 AM)
This is not a sonnet it has more than 14 lines! |