Sorry Poem by Indira Renganathan

Sorry

Rating: 5.0


We went upon that hill
To find a place in heaven

Shearing the silence the breeze
Was rippling down the valley

The hilly flora was in gentle jounce
That you rolled down in haste enticed

Knew not if you found your place
But I resolve to leave not this heaven

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 March 2021

Knew not if you found your place But I resolve to leave not this heaven....A poem with firm conviction! 5 stars dear madam

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Deluke Muwanigwa 16 March 2021

Poetry in motion. The metaphors, the meaning, stuff from heaven

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M Asim Nehal 16 March 2021

Brilliant! ! ! ! ! We all want to ensure a seat in Heaven and we often keep working to achieve it as end result. Thoughtful poem Madam.100***not knowing

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Varsha M 16 March 2021

Very true ma'am we keep chasing forgetting to enjoy the heaven we are living in.

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