Soul of a poem suffocates
With heavy dose of ornaments.
Simple and fluent it's flow
Enhances reader's face's glow.
Poems intricate and ornamental,
Dear to just a few luminaries,
Common man and language colloquial
Bind them in the boundaries.
C@ Ratnakar Mandlik
The point of your poem is clear- brevity, yet, world words, words, and more words. Also talk, talk, talk, and little walking the talk. We have more NATO (No Action, Talk Only) members, But who listens?
Soul of a poem suffocates With heavy dose of ornaments.....so true. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10
totally agree with you! ! Brevity is a goal to seek for! ! ! well expressed, Ratnakar! ! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brilliant piece. It's true and relevant. Thanks. Anjandev Roy.