Soul's Confusion Poem by Dana Amer

Soul's Confusion

Rating: 5.0


Something weird that's bothering me
But i can't exactly figure it out,
Is something i imagine, or something i can see? !
Or is it just a desire to shout? !

I can't stop thinking
In the world we live in,
I believe that we are sinking
In a sea of darkness & everyone is giving in!

Everything sounds weird
My mind is so confused,
Is it something i've seen
That changed my view to the world? !

Is it a mystery
That can't be solved?
Or is it just me...
Digging too deep into my soul? ? !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 03 January 2010

Is it a mystery That can't be solved? Or is it just me... Digging too deep into my soul? ? ! this stanza its self look like a compete short poem..and even the each stanza of this rich poem seems a separate poem..means that the complete poem is written with very professional...its rich and meaningful poem with melodic expression..loved it..10/10

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Romeo Della Valle 03 January 2010

Our lives, most of the times are full of questions and we can not find easy answers, but nevertheless, they will come to us at the right times...well penned, keep it up! 10+++

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James B. Earley 03 January 2010

Soulful introspection!

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James B. Earley 03 January 2010

Soulful introspection!

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