Space For You Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Space For You

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"He is not to be trusted" I heard
I thought it was reference for me to be told
I picked it right and just pondered
What should be thought of as it was offered!

To believe or not on what others say
Or to shut the eyes and go away
I don't believe in pigeon's approach
Where it shuts the eyes from cat and looses life as such

The best way is to accommodate
Don't involve in thing which in fact don't relate
Sometimes jealousy plays important role
You need not bother and respond to call

No one can claim any berth exclusively
As space goes to another person readily
It exists for a person who tries honestly
It shall be taken sportingly and lightly

Create a space even if it doesn't exist
Try for it forcefully and rightfully insist
It shall always be there and kept vacant
Only you try in time and be present

Life is meant to be explored
Nothing will be achieved if you feel bored
Drams may seem nice and sweet while you snore
But you need it in actual sphere and still need more

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“He is not to be trusted” I heard I thought it was reference for me to be told

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Dulen gogoi Yes true of course! A thoughtprovoking poem.But I feel is you can make it more concise, thank you for share!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

awesome flow Sonia G8 minutes ago Good poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

nice J J5 minutes ago perfect flow and interestingtopic

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It is a good poem which talks about determination. Man ought to think of greater things and expand. Thank you for the conscientization.

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Kasia Fedyk 30 July 2012

Oh so true, an open arms to hold with no limitations of how much it may. Love is endless and like a river flowing to discover more on its way to meet the ocean. So incredibly beautiful! Pure inspiration!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 29 July 2012

inspirational poem! I like it!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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