Spring Again Poem by Jim Norausky

Spring Again

Rating: 4.8


Buds blossom birds sing
beaches swell with libido
seniors walk in park.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 22 March 2009

The charm of spring is ageless. Lovely piece. Not a word wasted. 10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Catrina Heart 20 March 2009

stunning haiku creation, beautiful imagination...10

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Tsira Goge 20 March 2009

Jim it's Clear... beautiful... 10.... Best wishes, Tsira

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Another lovely Spring poem and Haiku too. Buds, blossoms, birds are all part of this celebration. A lovely fresh poem for all to enjoy. Karin Anderson

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Susan Williams 31 January 2016

beaches swell with libido- -love love love that line, it sits in the middle of your haiku like a jewel

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Very skillfully written to receive a bit of an outcry in the comments Jim. Do you know, I think you are pretty much right and I love every single word you have placed as each one plays such an important part in your masterpiece. 10 Karin Anderson

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Surayya Abbas 01 June 2009

Short but with freshness of Spring season.

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Tony Jolley 25 March 2009

Seniors sometimes go to the beach, too, Jim... with their libido.... possibly with their Viagra too [I'm not at that stage yet - so please do not consider me an authoritative source on this! ] Difficult in Houston, the beach, I grant you! Like the contradiction/implication between the second and third lines! From the title, even before seeing the stanza arrive, I couldn't stop hearing an old Bristish crooner called 'Max Bygraves' singing his signature tune with a slightly jewish 'lilt' to it: 'When it's Spring again, I'll sing again.... Tulips from Amsterdam...', made just slightly more unsettling by the fact he moved in not a few hundred yards from where I used to live in Bournemouth, England! Tony

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Eddie Roa 22 March 2009

as picturesque as a Renoir painting.

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