Lynn Kincade

Rookie (04 November 2009 / Australia)

Spring Haiku 1 - Poem by Lynn Kincade

An elusive scent
The ghost of winter falters
On one plum blossom


Comments about Spring Haiku 1 by Lynn Kincade

  • Rookie - 4 Points Martin O'Neill (1/23/2012 5:53:00 PM)

    This works. Haiku is difficult to pull off convincingly.
    Less is more is much more. This is really good. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 17 Points Goran Gustafsson (9/21/2009 2:10:00 AM)

    The transitions between seasons is in reality gradual. But often one experiences it as a special moment in time, like a hit by a sudden scent....... well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (9/5/2009 7:41:00 AM)

    Are you sure you're not Japanese? Your rapport with haiku is exceptional. Subtle and elegant. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (9/1/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    A beautiful haiku on the effective coming of spring. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,329 Points Jerry Hughes (9/1/2009 1:10:00 AM)

    ..........................evocative Lynn, well done. Warmly, Jerry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (8/31/2009 9:58:00 PM)

    Wonderful haiku, Lynn, like a capsule full of meanings and wonders.
    Regards

    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shawnee Gonzalez (8/31/2009 9:21:00 PM)

    short but sweet lynn
    ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rory Hudson (8/31/2009 7:52:00 PM)

    Very delicate and sensitive work Lynn. Well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 22, 2011


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