An elusive scent
The ghost of winter falters
On one plum blossom
Wonderful haiku, Lynn, like a capsule full of meanings and wonders. Regards Naseer
This works. Haiku is difficult to pull off convincingly. Less is more is much more. This is really good.
The transitions between seasons is in reality gradual. But often one experiences it as a special moment in time, like a hit by a sudden scent....... well done
Are you sure you're not Japanese? Your rapport with haiku is exceptional. Subtle and elegant. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
..........................evocative Lynn, well done. Warmly, Jerry
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very delicate and sensitive work Lynn. Well done.