Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 5,701 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Star Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Faraway twinkle

in the vastness of Heaven's

invisible scheme


The stars are watching

waiting for the journey's end

angels collect souls


The stars are twinkling

celestial memories

cycle flows and ends


Each orb a vision

radiant amber glows

the stars' twinkling light


Under a twinkling

firmament a starburst streams

radiant asters


Then one falls its tail

trails streaming stardust across

exploding midnight


How far your journey

was to bring such wonderful

awe and excitement


And now you are gone

taking my wishes with you

into forever


The stars are watching

amber ambrosia pours

claiming another soul


The sky is filled with

stellar constellation tales

a brief flash then gone


Comments about Star Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Gold Star - 5,701 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (3/26/2009 9:19:00 AM)

    You wrote a very nice haiku in answer to mine. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (3/25/2009 12:55:00 PM)

    A radiant tale
    Of stellar twinkling delight
    Souls seen, through the night

    GW62 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 21, 2009


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