Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 5,843 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Star Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Faraway twinkle

in the vastness of Heaven's

invisible scheme

The stars are watching

waiting for the journey's end

angels collect souls

The stars are twinkling

celestial memories

cycle flows and ends

Each orb a vision

radiant amber glows

the stars' twinkling light

Under a twinkling

firmament a starburst streams

radiant asters

Then one falls its tail

trails streaming stardust across

exploding midnight

How far your journey

was to bring such wonderful

awe and excitement

And now you are gone

taking my wishes with you

into forever

The stars are watching

amber ambrosia pours

claiming another soul

The sky is filled with

stellar constellation tales

a brief flash then gone

Comments about Star Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Gold Star - 5,843 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (3/26/2009 9:19:00 AM)

    You wrote a very nice haiku in answer to mine. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (3/25/2009 12:55:00 PM)

    A radiant tale
    Of stellar twinkling delight
    Souls seen, through the night

    GW62 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 21, 2009

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