Stevie Taite

Rookie (30th January 1973 / Kent, England)

Stark (5,3,1 Structure For Gulsher: -) - Poem by Stevie Taite

All matter that existence here
constructed of quark?
Stark

Everything you need for life
Fits one arc?
Stark

A misty graveyard with only
Song of Lark
Stark

Raving madness that takes hold
Makes you bark
Stark

Cutting bluntness of succinct remark
Stalks like shark
Stark

Barron, the searing hot desert
Must not disembark
Stark

Broken mind, shades
under depression
So very dark
Stark

Winters morn sitting on bench
In empty park
Stark


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Think it still works, and it wasn't too tricky to modify and fit a more traditional structure (every day is a school day) x

Comments about Stark (5,3,1 Structure For Gulsher: -) by Stevie Taite

  • Veteran Poet - 1,215 Points Xelam Kan (11/3/2012 9:31:00 AM)

    hahahhah did good job
    seems quite strange, isn`t?
    extremely thankful for mentioned me (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
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  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (11/3/2012 8:29:00 AM)

    how true....but fun to read so no complains about the piece

    thank you for sharing mam
    love
    payal (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stevie Taite (11/2/2012 11:55:00 PM)

    Aaaarrrgggg Thomas, that dies not fit the format!

    Waiting with mum at doctors
    Painfully boring afternoon
    Stark (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (11/2/2012 11:56:00 AM)

    waiting on mom
    in doctors office
    stark (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 2, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, November 2, 2012


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