Stillborn Poem by Stevie Taite

Stillborn

Rating: 5.0


S ilence did haunt the delivery room
T ortured by labour forlorn
I nfant lay lifeless in saddening gloom
L imp but so perfectly formed
L ife was not meant to inhabit their girl
B arren, the pain mum endured
O nly the sobs of the dad split the still
R ipped, by what must be inured
(N ine months to make death? cruel's the word)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Based on my friends heartbreaking description, when she could finally talk about it. The only sound and clearest memory she has of this tragedy was dad's sobs.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 28 January 2013

Amazing acrostic, pretty disturbing and haunting, no person should ever be able to feel this trauma. Thank you for sharing this lovely though depressing work. K.P.

0 0 Reply
Dee Corpolongo 09 January 2013

Oh this is such a very heartbreaking poem, and so sorry to hear this occurred... but you made a great poem to express your heartfelt thoughts to your friend.

0 0 Reply
Sandy Player 08 January 2013

reminds me of parliment hill fields by Sylvia Plath though that is a miscariage. essentially though i suspose their just as heart breaking.

0 0 Reply
Valerie Dohren 07 January 2013

Very sad Stevie - you may like to read mine also entitled Stillborn.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
Close
Error Success