State Of Wakefulness Poem by Marieta Maglas

State Of Wakefulness

Rating: 4.5


When you look at me,
My painful thinking stops and turns into tears.
Your unsaid words are still waiting,
Uttered to be expressed,
By cramming into the palate.
I know them all,
As you know your fingers,
Which touches me tenderly,
While they send me the thrill of separation.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

what an other wordly unison expressed in the seemingly innocous work

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Agnes Courtney 20 November 2009

great flow of emotions, nice poem.......... 10

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Afzal Shauq 12 November 2009

very true.. the silence has its own tongue to speak and expressions say every thing..even the things hiden inside heart are come up to inspire hearts..like you are saying here to your friend that his silence says every thing to you and you feel.. the finger touch of him makes you wake up..its a good conclusion... I can interprect as an open eyes dream..well done dr.mari..doing good job...inspiring enough..10/10

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Ritty Patnaik 16 June 2009

thrills of seperation is also the density of love felt at that moment, at all moments.a poem to treasure.thanks for sharing such beautiful work.

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Ruth Walters 14 June 2009

A truthful little poem, well written.

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Carol Gall 27 May 2009

thrill of separatness beautiful 10

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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