Still! Quiet! ! Shhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! Poem by sophia hayyat

Still! Quiet! ! Shhhhhhhhhhhh! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Dont move but observe the view
Small and tall trees,
Shrubs higher
Now lower, higher
Lower again, the boundary of the view
Fields green adjacent with
Vacant brown one.
Getting hazy day by day
Now dark enough not to light intervene,
Light enough not to dark reign the scenario.
Still still, still quiet.
All dark but clear blue sky
'Roushan' with half moon.
Contend, calm trying to solve the riddle.
Where reath wants to retain the mystery.
Sound convincing clear, blue sky
With half moon 'roushan' in the middle
Seems inviting
But captivating is the mystery, the quietude, the longing...
Still dark even the pavemnet
Next to fields and before shrubby boundary.
But little Ansa jumps and shouts!
'Look! there goes the star,
Hye! it looks like a star'.
Star comes closer 'khar khar khar'
Lightens the path in patch
And now the whole one.
There it goes 'khar khar khar'
Leaving smile and hope and dare
Dare to break the stillness, the riddle

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 25 July 2009

But little Ansa jumps and shouts! 'Look! there goes the star, Hye! it looks like a star'. Star comes closer 'khar khar khar' Lightens the path in patch And now the whole one. There it goes 'khar khar khar' a poetic short is this one.. innovative style of poetry... well written and the message in this poem is enough impressive... interesting... best of luck

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 November 2008

Its a big WOW poem! ! finely penned! 10++++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 November 2008

Nice poem...Really dare to break the stillness.....Cheero...! ! !

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Emily Oldham 07 November 2008

nice mysterious poem, keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***

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