~ Store In Soul Slot ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Store In Soul Slot ~

Rating: 5.0


KEEP IN SOUL SLOT
Ms. Nivedita
UK
December 14th 2009.

Tip top
Rose pot
Love dot
Romance spot.

Break all block
In heart lock.

I’m caught
Coalesce n’ clot
Take snap shot
Lo get you got.

As an ought
Swap all allot
Store in soul slot
Love you lot
I’m hot shot
Forget me not.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wow! ! Excellent emotional rhyming… ‘I’m caught/Coalesce n’ clot’ …nice metaphor ‘clot’ and ‘coalescing’ 14 Yeah such a lover must be in ‘Soul Slot’…beaus are desperate to get such lolol 10++

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 10 June 2010

How romantic! 'I've stored all the beautiful rhyming words in my 'soul Slot' Good job Niv a 10+++

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Ramesh Adwant 14 June 2010

I am caught in a snap shot of soul slot. The hot shot on the romance spot has caused a heart lock.

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David Beckham 03 August 2010

I'm hot shot, forget me not! ! wow...incredible, its not just that its poetry, it is also, words to live by everyday! Good job. totally love this poem

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Kranthi Pothineni 13 December 2009

:) very nice. Made a curve on my face.

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Abdul Haleemz 08 October 2011

Heyy, i Love the way you described your poem in a very detailed way, sorry i couldn't reply earlier as i didn't have time to go on the computer PS. Keep up the good work, n Write till you dropp ;)

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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 December 2010

I definately won't forget you.

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Sandeep Sharma 20 November 2010

A great work! ! ! You have fabulous technique of expressing hidden emotions. keep it up. God bless you.10/10

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Miroslava Odalovic 16 October 2010

Sounds like tip toeing the soul of love. Very nice :)

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Kevin Carney 06 October 2010

Poetry and music as one. So cleverly done and whimsical. It's very uplifting and great placement of words. Last line 'I'm hot shot, forget me not' great way to end it. Beautiful.

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