Story Of A Computer Poem by JOBY JOHN
Story Of A Computer
A well designed machine, I am
Thrown to be and to be to serve
To serve the Master as per his needs
The loaded needs are my deeds
And my deeds for all his greed
Praising when his needs are done
Cursing when his needs not met
For my being for his tasks
For my rest, he never set time
That led me rest that see the rest
And my rest made him wrath
His wrath led me take a rest
And this rest is for all the rest
There is nothing remotely poetic about these chopped lines. You need to improve the punctuation, the grammar, and the logic of what you are saying. I can`t enter into details due to space, but this is bad poetry
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/27/2024 5:42:27 PM # 1.0.0.1119
An excellently worded poem about a computer, beacuse some words are not clearly written, at least for me as the reader, so this poem has a tiny hilarious tone. BUT you wrote a finest poem about the most used instrument for us all: Computer. I have enjoyed this precious poem