Timothy Venard

Rookie (November 29th 1995 / Lewes)

stupid girl ecape him


Stupid girl don’t do it
Can’t you see he’s bad?
Stupid girl ignore him
Can’t you see he’s mad?

Stupid girl resist him
Can’t you see he wants one thing?
Stupid girl i can’t watch this
Can’t you see your suffering?



this poem is dedicated to a friend of mine who made all the wrong choices.- it is deticated to some one who has had relationship trouble, - her boyfriend dosn't miss treat her in any way, and they are happy together.

Submitted: Thursday, September 10, 2009
Edited: Friday, September 18, 2009

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  • Rookie Vincent Armone (10/13/2009 1:22:00 PM)

    Good job tim cant believe just 14 years old. having said that resist the urge to ryme every poem and let the word truly flow from your heart. its not about ratings or commemts but about you up on the page best wishes vincent (Report) Reply

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