Timothy Venard

Rookie (November 29th 1995 / Lewes)

Stupid Girl Ecape Him - Poem by Timothy Venard

Stupid girl don’t do it
Can’t you see he’s bad?
Stupid girl ignore him
Can’t you see he’s mad?

Stupid girl resist him
Can’t you see he wants one thing?
Stupid girl i can’t watch this
Can’t you see your suffering?



this poem is dedicated to a friend of mine who made all the wrong choices.- it is deticated to some one who has had relationship trouble, - her boyfriend dosn't miss treat her in any way, and they are happy together.


Comments about Stupid Girl Ecape Him by Timothy Venard

  • Rookie Vincent Armone (10/13/2009 1:22:00 PM)

    Good job tim cant believe just 14 years old. having said that resist the urge to ryme every poem and let the word truly flow from your heart. its not about ratings or commemts but about you up on the page best wishes vincent (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Carol Gall (9/16/2009 2:04:00 PM)

    too bad we see and they dont listen but be a friend 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Seneca Lennox (9/10/2009 1:00:00 PM)

    i enjoyed this poem..
    and i relate to it... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 10, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, September 18, 2009


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