Timothy Venard

(November 29th 1995 / Lewes)

A Broken Heart


A broken heart
A single tear
A broken heart
A pain for years
A broken heart
A ruined life
A broken heart
A blood stained knife

Submitted: Wednesday, September 09, 2009
Edited: Thursday, September 10, 2009

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  • Aleisha Luyt (9/23/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    love comes
    love goes
    through every single one it flows
    is it good
    or is it bad
    but in the end someone is always left sad

    Great poem
    short but makes sense
    great work (Report) Reply

  • Stacey Pinto (9/17/2009 2:24:00 PM)

    i go by every line of wat u've written
    wen ur heart is broken its realli feels dat way
    but as time passes on the pain subsides
    the pain lasts as long as you want it to last

    love the way how the lines come out so strong and
    powerful even though they are short (Report) Reply

  • Susan Jarvis (9/16/2009 2:32:00 PM)

    Some very vivid imagery in so very few words. Repetition is used effectively and adds to the impact. A powerful piece of poetry - excellent stuff! S :) (Report) Reply

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