Style Statement Poem by Sandra Martyres

Style Statement

Rating: 5.0


A near perfect face
Exuding a touch of grace
A Cleopatra-like long neck
Enhanced with delicate jewellery
A long flowing black gown
Falling loosely over the tall slim body
Long well manicured finger nails
Bright red painted toe tails
That is her style statement.
And a good one too.

No one knows who she is
Or from where she comes
But who cares
With her stunning good looks
She is always surrounded
By tall handsome wannabe guys
Craving her undivided attention
And eager to have her hanging on their arm
But will she or wont she
Make a final choice of a guy?
Or will she continue to play
The hard to get game?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 20 April 2009

Delightful write Sandra...beautifully written...10+++

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she would i think play the game and extend her career

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Kesav Easwaran 21 April 2009

he or she, whoever wins or loses, it's all a gamble game...the life...i liked your presentation style, Sandra...10

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Vaibhav Pandey 21 April 2009

all your poems have great pace which I think is very good....very nice....10

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Meggie Gultiano 21 April 2009

well, it is up to her, really, and that's her style statement..Umm, this is good

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Patti Masterman 25 August 2009

Possibly she could become addicted to the attention. Has never been problem for yours truly. Haha, great story of a poem. I can just see the femme fatale in my line of vision.

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Ted M 23 August 2009

On one hand you dazzle us with amazing beauty and on the other you point out the dark reality effectively showing us the two sides in the same stroke. The artistic talent in you has created such a picture that it almost overshadows the point you want to make. I'm having a hard time trying to clear that scene from my screen........10

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Michael Harmon 25 May 2009

Nicely-expressed, Sandra. The poem itself has a graceful style. :)

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Saadat Tahir 13 May 2009

hi sandra its a very nice poem...deals with the folly of todays truisms.. thanx for giving us this beauty cheers

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C. P. Sharma 03 May 2009

A true modern Cleopatra to ' launch a thousand ships'. Style is the woman and I love it. CP

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