Subsiding Pain Poem by Marvin Brato Sr
Subsiding Pain
You not talking to me now,
Breaks my hearts somehow.
It hurts so much being ignored,
By someone whom I adored.
You not looking at me
Gives pain can't you see?
My days become empty
Please share a sympathy
Yet no matter what I really do,
It seems that you want me to go.
If it is your great wish my dear,
Then this fact I have to bear.
To see you leave ruin my life,
And makes me suffer with strife.
But on the other side of the coin,
It made me strong to keep going.
Somehow I learn to be rational,
That being abandon is natural.
Wounded pride can heal soon,
Pain subsides in the new moon.
The bleakness and the hopelessness are beautifully captured. But what I like is the emergence of the new moon with the pain... Gives hope... A beautiful poem!
Brilliant work, time a healer for all those wounds and pains, well composed good poem. wish a full moon and new dawn clear all those pains
Brilliant work, time can heal all those wounds and pains, wish a full moon and new dawn shine after all those pains, a well crafted poem with heartfelt lines.
Love your last line 'pain subsides in the new moon'. A powerful antidote to abandonment. Compassionate penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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i also really liked this one, very musical and very well captured feelings