Sudden Colic Poem by Sahar Sahar

Sudden Colic

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Do you remember,
There was a promise,
Between us,
A home erected in dreams,
an unforgettable, unfulfilled dream, ,
pojected in pulses of my veins,
and things became just a desert,
with time,
suddenly i saw you in a crowd,
i closed my eyes tight,
smelled a stale desire,
putrid image of your person,
hanged before my eyes.
An intense colic,
In my abdomen,
I suffered whole life,
The pains so deep,
I dare not,
To come out of deceptive spells.,
To open my eyes,
To face the real,
Ckocking my breaths,
Making my tears,
An acid,
Inflaming my eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 October 2009

dare not, To come out of deceptive spells., To open my eyes, To face the real, one must face tereality of life and should not go for dream based things....really wonderful poem....10 read mienall dremas not come true....

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