Marieta Maglas

Rookie - 971 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Suicide


Her rags made her feel imprisoned in an invisible cage.

She was looking nowhere through glasses with glassy eyes

Searching for her leafed tree of reality.

She remembered that she left her ideas

On the blank page of her future.

She became a wet gloomy solitude because of her tears.

Her feelings of love were like songs hidden in an abandoned violin.

Their vibrations were haunting her memories.

Her sadness was so complete

That it completely slipped through her shy smile

To become visible to all the people around.

Her rigged reality was poisoning her hopes

And crowding her thoughts to push them into illusions.

She was a simple child inside her clown body,

A soul so caged wanting to be liberated,

While her delusions were wretchedly dancing her hopes.

She was wondering if somewhere, someone

Was thinking and dreaming of her.

She walked so lonely on her lonely life road

That nothing could change her fate.

She wanted to let her life to float on the losing breeze.

Submitted: Monday, December 05, 2011
Edited: Monday, April 29, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,336 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (12/14/2011 5:17:00 AM)

    beautiful beauty of repetitional use of the same word. simply marvelous. changing variations of application ringing with loud decency embracing emotion with its prior choice...And that she is known now throughout the world. continents are full of those...so, as an object selection of she is also universal.
    Regards,
    pranab
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  • Rookie - 52 Points Sylvia Frances Chan (12/6/2011 12:19:00 PM)

    SHE, beautifully set up, well thought poem, sublime! (Report) Reply

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