Sun Is Falling Down Poem by Gaurav Pandey

Sun Is Falling Down



when I was thinking about u, , I felt like you are my sunshine, , ,
yeah, , you came and removed all the darkness from me..
you was entering inside me, ,
with your lovely sparkling smile...
sometimes I was afraid from clouds, ,
but you was penetrating them...
with all your powers, , and was coming to me...
I felt like I was waiting for you from ages., , ,
I was waiting for my sunshine....
I got you at the same time, , ,
I forgot that there is also night has to come, , ,
and sunshine will loose its sparks,
soon its glow was fading again, , ,
at the same time when i need you most, , ,
you are leaving me alone, , ,
thinking about all your powers which made me slave of your smile, , ,
are now giving me incorrigible pain,
because I know that SUN is falling down, , ,
with its SUNSHINE, , ,
the sunshine which was making us together, , ,
now made me alone, , , ,

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
there is no story about it.... sometimes people left us with no words, , just with lots of hopes...just trying to describe that feeling... dont expect much, , I m just a TYRO here..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 29 August 2013

From East the sun come A hope in the air my friend, A new day to borrow Live the light with smile Till it dark Till we at night Where to the west sun gone But came moon remind Sleep and worry not Till the sun comes again I will be there I always here so sleep and wait Sun will come again from east He is coming... but time for sleep And new light will come from east And i will move to west and so life is my friend nothing stay forever but it happened for good moon and sun..tell u all_Soul

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Beautiful poem..You have presented very beautifully..Sun shine give powerful light which makes our life bright, but Darkness or night is another side of coin, which also give us something. When we are alone in dark, we can search for ourselves inside and understand the meanings of life too...Loved the way, you presented.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 August 2013

O the very true. good poem, thanks, Only a true poet can say like this. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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