im writting this to let you know your more than a friend
and that you have helped me find my smile again
i dig your style so i ask if you shovel
some say love is blind but im dizzy and seeing everything in double
when i say that i mean not just one but two
seeing nothing else in the world but me and you
when i think of you i have a smile on my face
when i think of us i feel like i finally found my place
all the darkness in my life gives birth to a new light
thats how i know what we are doing is right
GIRL you are my flower from the sun
and only with you do i want to watch us grow together as one
blossoming up to the clouds and through the sky
past the stars together you and i
wonderful poem, , you best had stolen her heart..
This poem is just lovely it puts a smile on my face when I read it. I know whoever she is can't help but feel beautiful after reading this.
Ahh, so there is more to you than just a gloomy guy. lol. jk. This is so sweet! Lucky her! I'd just melt if a guy read this to me! I love it because it's so free, so heartfelt and natural.
aww... that is sweet. I love it. Guys really are that sweet? ? he he JK. Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it
awwww this one is cute. a change from your other work ive read so far. its funny it discribed exactlly how i feel atm. lol. told ya, every piece i relate to. not many people can do that with ALL of their work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yeah, im so glad you eventually posted it! i LOVE this one, the way you contain feelings without making it sound sappy is incredible... my new favourite! ! !