Surprising Spaces Poem by Abdul Wahab

Surprising Spaces

Rating: 3.7


In between the lines
I leave a gap

And among the words
A space

Full of wonder
And grace

Where I have the treasure
Left open ended

The meaning
Of life

And the essence
Of poems

Written without
Commas and full stops

Leaving a scope
And an opportunity

For various interpretations
And growth

Value of truth
And beauty of light

Weakness
And strength

All they revolve
And evolve

Within those
Surprising spaces.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris G. Vaillancourt 29 August 2013

I truly love this poem, it is very well written.

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Heather Wilkins 29 August 2013

Where I have left the treasure left open ended the meaning of life. it is always my pleasure to fill in the spaces of your writing. 10 excellent

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 August 2013

so beautiful nice poem

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 August 2013

Full of wonder And grace ... The meaning Of life Beautifully put. Spaces get meaning. Thank you.

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Hussein Ismael 28 August 2013

nice. so much nice! Weakness And strength All they revolve And evolve Within those Surprising spaces.

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