Sweet Hello Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sweet Hello

Rating: 5.0


“Good morning dear” sweet hello
I was just up and allowed
She was good friend on net
Surrounded by friends on lovely date

“How can world be so beautiful”?
I thought and considered it purposeful
To have friends around and enjoy
It is one of the beautiful gift with joy

“Hi, send some of your beautiful friends here”
I teased in good mood to her
Yes, yes deserve first for it and then invite
It was good to have friends and greet

Some of the friends are very kind
They will never get offended or mind
After all it is brief encounter
That bursts one into big laughter

I have come to know many friends
Some of them have remained intimate till end
Yes, it is rare opportunity
To know them well with best of the quality

Many friends differ and argue
Come with their point of views
It is really great to have known them closely
It provides insight with sweet feeling too readily

I feel quite at ease when start writing
They are all seen in inviting
It is great pleasure to know their thoughts
Some of them are not easy to be caught

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

Post exuberantly beautiful Anna Laurencio1 minute ago Many friends differ and argue Come with their point of views It is really great to have known them closely It provides insight with sweet feeling too readily Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

Post exuberantly beautiful Anna Laurencio1 minute ago Many friends differ and argue Come with their point of views Not sure, Cheryl BoyerLess than a minute ago it's all over hte place Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

Um. Kelsey HarrellLess than a minute ago Well, the poem seemed a bit choppy to me.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

“Good morning dear” sweet hello I was just up and allowed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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