hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 33,972 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Sweet Hello - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

“Good morning dear” sweet hello
I was just up and allowed
She was good friend on net
Surrounded by friends on lovely date

“How can world be so beautiful”?
I thought and considered it purposeful
To have friends around and enjoy
It is one of the beautiful gift with joy

“Hi, send some of your beautiful friends here”
I teased in good mood to her
Yes, yes deserve first for it and then invite
It was good to have friends and greet

Some of the friends are very kind
They will never get offended or mind
After all it is brief encounter
That bursts one into big laughter

I have come to know many friends
Some of them have remained intimate till end
Yes, it is rare opportunity
To know them well with best of the quality

Many friends differ and argue
Come with their point of views
It is really great to have known them closely
It provides insight with sweet feeling too readily

I feel quite at ease when start writing
They are all seen in inviting
It is great pleasure to know their thoughts
Some of them are not easy to be caught


Comments about Sweet Hello by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 33,972 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 9:21:00 PM)


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    exuberantly beautiful

    Anna Laurencio1 minute ago

    Many friends differ and argue
    Come with their point of views
    It is really great to have known them closely
    It provides insight with sweet feeling too readily
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  • Gold Star - 33,972 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 9:21:00 PM)


    Post
    exuberantly beautiful

    Anna Laurencio1 minute ago

    Many friends differ and argue
    Come with their point of views

    Not sure,


    Cheryl BoyerLess than a minute ago
    it's all over hte place
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,972 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 9:20:00 PM)

    Um.


    Kelsey HarrellLess than a minute ago
    Well, the poem seemed a bit choppy to me. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,972 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 9:19:00 PM)

    “Good morning dear” sweet hello
    I was just up and allowed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 26, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, January 27, 2014


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