Herbert Guitang

Sweet Sticky Bed Dreams - Poem by Herbert Guitang

With a soft flowers of marshy blanket
A gentle breeze touches muddy pillows
Bouncing delicates coils of arms
Wraps tightly on asheet of madness

Circling around head of pillar stand
Spread widely on a thighs of garters
Knitted in every sides of gentle backs
With a beautiful views of healthy two hills with pinkish shadows

Sloping of palms igniting caves of haven
Within heavenly fingers sew wets corners
Oils and peak sweats shafts inside
Curving and curbing shouts and moans of stars

Clasping the hair of joyous rising
Kneeling to get the happy moments
Bowing invertedly to fly high and hi gher galaxy
Like climbing up and down to the cottons of the tickling spots

Like a smooth shaft lubricating the sweetness of sleep
Driving on a canopy hungry lips
On a spring of dancing in muscle control
Digging in many styles in a deep through deeper
in a caressing bedrest from wild sleep.

Comments about Sweet Sticky Bed Dreams by Herbert Guitang

  • Gold Star - 16,861 Points John Westlake (8/13/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    A poem that sticks to its title true. Good enough. Sensitively written and full respect for that (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 125 Points Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:38:00 AM)

    ....a gentle breezing poem drifting into nicety of the poem. Brilliant! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 4:17:00 AM)

    Full of sensitivities of this poem. So delicate in refine manner. Great poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Jessica Hernandez-damian (4/25/2014 8:14:00 PM)

    Love the poem. Its very sweet and dreamy indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 421 Points Shania K. Younce (4/25/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    I fine this poem to be written in a fine manner. Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points Monica Rupazo (12/6/2013 11:52:00 PM)

    This has become my best poem, it is so poetic in literal manner well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie P.k Freitas (11/30/2013 4:40:00 PM)

    This is sensually sweet sticky dream indeed... Nice write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 30, 2013

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