Take Care Now Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Take Care Now

Rating: 2.8


“You do no such things”
She was pleading for something
I was getting wild with her
She was shivering with fear

I pulled her
She was unwilling to come near
She never wanted such counter
I was really mad after her

Her face made me to think
She had closed eyes but was not ready to sink
She was in double mind and objected
I forced her with double strength and reacted

No, No not this time
She was refusing to gain time
I failed to understand her resistance
This was supposed to be golden chance

I found her at comfort
As she had grasped my inner conflict
She now knew to be safe even in grip
She did not try to go away or slip

What made her to resist?
She never did it at first
I left the troubled mind at rest
I thought it will be the best

“Take care and bye”
She smiled gently with hello try
I too responded with same care
She was same as before

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2014

lovely hemu gupta26 minutes ago lovely Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2014

love Monica Hill30 minutes ago it Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2014

not bad steven west28 minutes ago :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2014

“You do no such things” She was pleading for something

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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