Treasure Island

yolandey breedt

(1987/05/04 / south africa)

Take Time To Notice

In my eyes you might find
Unseen emotions but only if you look deeply
As my soul can reveal what I truly feel
Speaking with you with not a single lie

When you look at me you will see
A smile that tells you I’m fine
But deep in my wounded heart there are unnoticed emotions
Where there is a lot I intend to hide

If you had to gently touch me
You could help set my every emotion free
With one passionate kiss that could make everything right
Only if you knew how you truly make me feel

Deep inside there are so many things I would say
Because of how you would make me feel
But to you I can never reveal
Any emotion as you don’t notice me

To you I don’t exist I’m invisible
So than I guess you will never really know
How strong my feelings for you tend to grow
As to you I’m a no body

Even though it hurts me
To know that I would make you happy
In more than one way
If only you could take the time and notice me.

Submitted: Thursday, September 12, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 12, 2013

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this is apoem about a gril thats crazy about a guy but the thing is he doesnt even notice her no matter what she tries to do to get his a attention and it hurts her as she knows that she could make him happy as she would do anything for him

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